Thursday 28 January 2010

Pitch Feedback from Andrea

Your thriller uses the theme of obsession and that concept is central to the narrative, which is a common thriller convention. I think you have a lot of work on your hands preparing the props you are going to need in order to convincingly illustrate an obsession. My advice would be to keep your camerawork tight so you don't have to produce enough photos to cover a whole wall for example.
Also if you are going to use a narrator you need to think about why would a stalker be talking about a previous obsession, that seems unlikely. You need to script the voiceover carefully.

Good work so far, I look forward to reading the detailed proposal.

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